Section III Writing

Part A

51. Directions:

Write a letter of about 100 words to the president of your university, suggesting how to improve students’ physical condition.

You should include the details you think necessary.

You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.

Do not write the address.(10 points)

2014英語(yǔ)一小作文真題解析

今年小作文不出預(yù)料，再一次考到了建議信。在我們英語(yǔ)一的考試當(dāng)中，建議信已經(jīng)反復(fù)考過三次，分別是2007年，2009年和2012年。因此，考生要高度重視歷年真題，因?yàn)榭歼^的話題或是書信類型會(huì)反復(fù)考查。今年考題的Direction要求就學(xué)校課程給校長(zhǎng)提建議。根據(jù)題目的要求，我們可以判斷本文為公務(wù)信函，語(yǔ)域?yàn)檎秸Z(yǔ)域，即不能出現(xiàn)縮寫、省略問句和和口語(yǔ)表達(dá)。

稱呼： Dear Mr. President,注意稱呼中，所有實(shí)詞首字母全部大寫，Dear Mr. President后面的逗號(hào)不可丟，也不能寫成冒號(hào)。

正文

第一段：寫作內(nèi)容需涵蓋兩點(diǎn)：寫信目的，表明建議;贊揚(yáng)在前，建議在后。文章開頭開門見山的表明了寫信目的，用到了這樣的表達(dá)It is my great honor to write to you. 第二句贊揚(yáng)在前，建議在后。文中用到了這樣的表達(dá)As far as I am concerned, we have enough extraordinary lectures and what we need now is physical exercise.

第二段： 寫作內(nèi)容為建議細(xì)節(jié)。首先，希望學(xué)校能夠安排更多的體育課程;其次，希望學(xué)校能夠制定固定的時(shí)間表來保證課外活動(dòng)的時(shí)間。再次，希望全體教員也能參與其中。

第三段：寫作內(nèi)容為寄予期待，表示感謝。注意語(yǔ)氣真摯禮貌。

落款： Yours sincerely, 特別提醒sincerely后面逗號(hào)不能丟;

簽名： Li Ming 特別注意 Ming 后面一定不能出現(xiàn)句點(diǎn)。

參考范文如下：

Dear Mr. President,

It is my great honor to write to you. As far as I am concerned, we have enough extraordinary lectures and what we need now is physical exercise.

Since most of the time is spent in watching TV and playing computer games, our physical conditions are not good enough. i still have some suggestions for you. To begin with, our university should arrange more PE classes. To continue, we should have a fixed schedule for a certain time of outdoor activity. What is more, teaching faculty should be involved in the same kind of physical exercise.

I hope that our university could take the responsibility for our students’ physical health. I will be highly grateful if you could take my suggestions into account.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming